Sorry :(

I liked the initial sketch more, I don't like the result.
I think the customer did not like this drawing either, I have such a feeling. 
It is very unfortunate that I so failed the customer, the drawing turned out as it seems to me not as I personally imagined it in my head.
I did not have the experience to do better.
I .. have no idea how to do it better, too little drawing experience.
Probably the fact is that too much was paid for this drawing, I think it is not worth the money.

YCH
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